For the first few days of school we wrote a piece of writing together. We wrote about our memories of summer. We crafted our writing by going back and changing it and improving it. Mrs Dobson thought we were awesome writers because we were able to paint a picture with our words. Room 8 ROCK!!
3 comments:
Your writing is fabulous Room 7! I loved reading your memories of summer. I hope those seagulls didn't eat too many of your chips on the beach!
What great memories of summer- I enjoyed reading your great story!
I loved reading about your summer stories Room 8. I think there are some very good artists in this class too!
Rhys' Mum.
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